That’s a super real hoot Tracy, in and of itself. It stands alone blinking on and off, really really realistic funny like off the map hilarious, in my affectionately cra cra mind!
The Running
Portrays a multidimensional space and mental thought in a short word span, I love its brevity, and abrupt stop, making me wonder for more, brilliant.
And the intriguing photo by Bruno Martins with its peculiar light and the mysterious hatted man, with the elders sitting over yonder shoulder to shoulder on a park bench, very captivating.
Tracy, you are not limited by your imagination, and that tickles me pink.
I so value your readership and commentary, Gealdine! You have captured a bit of what I found as I finished this odd little micro- is it more about the Runner or about the man on the bench… 🤔😉🥰🥰 Thanks so much for your time and support-it means much to me! 🙏🏼✨✨
Yes, he was a low key stalker of sorts. After I wrote it, I was left to consider which of the two were facing eternal torment. Thank you for reading and commenting. These shorts leave much room for ambiguity and multiple interpretations.
Oh please don’t be sorry- I thought your comment was sensitive and caring. It’s always so interesting to see how readers see something- in many cases, more insightful perhaps than I was as the writer! Your thoughts are much appreciated- they make me think more about the meaning also. 🥰
Microdosing prompt: Torment, 100 mg
That’s a super real hoot Tracy, in and of itself. It stands alone blinking on and off, really really realistic funny like off the map hilarious, in my affectionately cra cra mind!
The Running
Portrays a multidimensional space and mental thought in a short word span, I love its brevity, and abrupt stop, making me wonder for more, brilliant.
And the intriguing photo by Bruno Martins with its peculiar light and the mysterious hatted man, with the elders sitting over yonder shoulder to shoulder on a park bench, very captivating.
Tracy, you are not limited by your imagination, and that tickles me pink.
Sleep well, G
I so value your readership and commentary, Gealdine! You have captured a bit of what I found as I finished this odd little micro- is it more about the Runner or about the man on the bench… 🤔😉🥰🥰 Thanks so much for your time and support-it means much to me! 🙏🏼✨✨
Wonderful originality, Tracy!!
There is a strong dichotomy between the man on the bench and the girl running. She is free as a bird, and the bench seems to imprison him. ✨
Am I the only one who sees shades of Dexter?
I loved Dexter!! Maybe…, 🤣
sending that sweet girl Peace. eternal peace.
Yes, he was a low key stalker of sorts. After I wrote it, I was left to consider which of the two were facing eternal torment. Thank you for reading and commenting. These shorts leave much room for ambiguity and multiple interpretations.
Geez. I’m sorry. That’s not cool.
Oh please don’t be sorry- I thought your comment was sensitive and caring. It’s always so interesting to see how readers see something- in many cases, more insightful perhaps than I was as the writer! Your thoughts are much appreciated- they make me think more about the meaning also. 🥰
I love how you perceive and share. Thank you! I appreciate the clarification too! Huge hug
Back at you! 🥰