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Very nice. Made my toes curl.

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Thanks so much for taking time to read and comment! Love it that you liked it! 🥰🙏🏼

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Let’s pray it’s not true.

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It is not "me" - sometimes the monsters I create are a bit me...this was just a "fun" horror sort of piece. I kept feeling in my mind with "embrace", a chilliness and I copied (somewhat) the rhythm of Poe's "Nevermore". Thank you so much for reading and caring. Love and blessings to you this day :)

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I definitely got the Poe feeling. Good job!😊

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Love it!

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Very nice, Tracy!

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Thank you! I truly appreciate comments from you - so happy you read my posts and thrilled when you comment - made my day 🥰🤗🙏🏼

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I tend to drift these days. But I will make it a point to leave a note! Very clean poem and I loved the rhythm you worked in. Talent!

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You are one of my favorite writers on here- always like you writing style and how well you pull your reader into your worlds- it always feels so genuine and creative. Appreciate any time you have for commenting . 🫶🏼🙏🏼😊

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Maximum charge dear Tracy, grounded and self-actualized, poetry as ritual and healing medicine!

I’m feeling your love and permission, and your conscious acceptance of your hard won precious wisdom and voice!

Poetry is Remedy

BOOM BOOM BOOM

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Thank you so much! I have a fantasy story coming out next month called “The Lost and the Veil” which was inspired by your thealogy. It is my first attempt at fantasy writing and am looking forward to hearing your reaction to it. Your support has meant so much to me and I always look forward to your comments, posts and notes. Have a magical evening 🥰🫶🏼✨✨

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This is excellent. Rarely is sadness done so well. I can feel it. Come. Sit right over there. we can be alone together.

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Thank you so much for your comment, Bliss, poetic in its own right. I thought it strange when I reacted to the “embrace” prompt with an immediate aversion to the idea of it, and just went with it. I truly appreciate your comment- evokes a depth of understanding what this can feel like. 🙏🏼🙏🏼🫶🏼✨

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So you were working from your pure emotional reaction? I was filled with sadness for this little person. No hugs, no cuddles with a book, all I could think to answer was, it's okay, come sit with me. It's like that in school at times. Emotions are part of what makes life feel abundant. Each emotion has it's own beauty. This is going to sound weird, but thank y9ou for filling me with sadness, it made my heart feel huge. You are a craftsman.

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You are so kind! Another sweet reader reacted as you did and It felt so loving. Actually, I drew from my own experience, not from my feelings, but from growing up with my mother who I suspect was undiagnosed …something…maybe auspergers. I am so moved by your reaction- my mother and I had a very complicated relationship. I suppose I channeled her a bit and must have done it well. 🫶🏼🫶🏼🙏🏼💕

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I have worked with children who were diagnosed with Asperger's Syndrome, and Autism. Very sweet kids, with some incredible coping mechanisms. I still have some of the drawings they gave me. Communication can be difficult, but a calm demeanor, and soothing voice, helps. You probably developed skills of communication that some people do not have. You are unique, I'm really happy to be reading you.

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Bliss, I am so happy to see your response to this poem and to know you enjoy my writing. I also worked in a special education classroom years ago and found my entire mindset overhauled by what I learned and saw. There was a depth of feeling and such a rich internal landscape that sometimes if you were fortunate, they would share with you. Thank you again, and I hope we chat again soon 🥰🤗🙏🏼🫶🏼

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Poe-etic!

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Clever! 🤣🤣

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